Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports. For example, when a drug or "Steroid" is abused, there is a chance it can be psychologically can change and be mutated to cancer. In addition, Steroids have much more affects, for example doctors have proven that you can get "roid rage" which is when the person gets mad, and they can be very aggressive. Also, many other famous athletes work hard to get where they are now, many have done it with determination and no need for Steroids. In conclusion, performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports.
Stefani, you forgot to include the vocabulary words: period, tradition , & primary. Also, remember to use the two chunks when writing these paragraphs in the future. You have some specific facts in here, such as the detail about roid rage. I want you to explain these in more depth using commentary. Keep working!
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